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MLP: PAM S3E11: Dorothy Vs Eclipse Flare

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One sunny day in Equestria, Cal and Dorothy were going out for a walk, admiring the beautiful day they were having together.

Dorothy: Isn't Equestria just beautiful, Cal?

Cal: Yep sure is.

Dorothy: :aww:

Cal: What do you want to go do?

Dorothy: I just want to walk with you on this beautiful day, silly. :giggle:

Cal: Oh okay. :blushes:

Then, they heard a noise.

Cal: What was that?

Dorothy: Let's take a look.

Then, they saw somepony.

Cal: Hello? Somepony there?

The pony was moving, but then stopped. She turned her head to see Cal and Dorothy.

Cal: Woo. Who are you?

Eclipse: My name is Eclipse Flare. And who might you be?

Cal: I'm Cal Lewis and this is my girlfriend, Dorothy. :handshake:

Dorothy: Hello, Eclipse.

Eclipse: Your boyfriend sure looks pretty, dear.

Dorothy: He does, doesn't he? :aww:.

Eclipse: Indeed.

Cal: So what brings you here, Eclipse?

Eclipse: Oh, I was just going through the neighborhood and I just happened to come here.

Cal: OK?

Eclipse: So what have you been up to, Cal?

Cal: I was just walking with Dorothy.

Eclipse: Mind if I join?

Cal: Is it alright with you, Dorothy?

Dorothy: It's fine by me. :)

Cal: So, sure. Why not? :)

Eclipse: Great!

So Cal, Dorothy, and Eclipse started to walk together. (Time passes) But then, Cal and Eclipse started to talk about some things between one another.

Dorothy in her thoughts: What could they be saying over there?

Eclipse: So, you fight crime in this city called Petropoodle?

Cal: Petropolis!

Eclipse: Oh sorry. Petropolis. You fight crime there?

Cal: Yep we sure do. :D

Eclipse: Hmmm. (She is shown to have evil eyes by the audience)

Cal: Anything else you want to say?

Eclipse: Huh? Well, why don't we go get something to eat. Maybe in Ponyville?

Cal: Well, OK.

Dorothy: What's going on?

Cal: Huh?

Dorothy: What were you talking about?

Eclipse: Oh. Just things. ^^;

Dorothy: Um.....Alright.

Dorothy in her thoughts: I don't think I trust this Eclipse pony.

Later in Ponyville...

Cal: So where do you guys want to eat at?

Eclipse: A hay burger would be pretty nice.

Cal: OK. How about you, Dorothy?

Dorothy: Um...Alright.

Cal: Great. :D

Eclipse and Cal started to go inside, but Dorothy was looking worried. Then, I came by.

Eli: Hey, Dorothy. What's going on?

Dorothy: Cal and I found this pony called Eclipse Flare.

Eli: A new pony? Well, that sounds great.

Dorothy: Problem is, I don't think I should really trust her.

Eli: Why not?

Dorothy: I don't know. I think she might be.....Is it alright if I tell you?

Eli: Sure.

Dorothy: (Looks around to see if any pony is watching, then leans over to Eli's ear) I think she's evil.

Eli: Evil?

Dorothy: Please don't tell anyone, OK?

Eli: Um. Alright. Maybe I should go in with you and make sure things are OK between you and Cal.

Dorothy: That's alright. I can manage.

And Dorothy went in after Cal and Eclipse.

Cal: Hey Dorothy, where have you been?

Dorothy: Oh, I was just distracted. That's all.

Cal: Distracted by who?

Dorothy: It's nothing.

Cal: OK?....

Later on, Eclipse was still hanging out with Cal. Dorothy started to get a bit jealous.

Cal: (Looks at Dorothy) Dorothy, are you OK?

Dorothy: (Sighs) Everything's fine, I suppose.

Cal: You sure?

Dorothy: Yes.

Cal: Well, OK then.

Eclipse: Hey, Cal, want to come over to my house?

Cal: Ah...Sure. I guess so. Dorothy?

Dorothy: That's OK. You go on without me.

Cal: Well, OK.

And with that Cal and Eclipse walked away while Dorothy went on her way home.

Meanwhile at Twilight's castle

Starlight: So what are we doing today guys?

Twilight: What would you like to do, Starlight?

Starlight: No idea.

Twilight: Well, there's plenty of time to think about it. If you like, you could go take a rest for right now.

Starlight: Well. Ok

Then Cal comes in

Cal: Hi guys. :) (Smile)

Twilight: Hi, Cal. What brings you here?

Cal: Have you meant Eclipse? She's so nice

The mane six and Starlight: *gasp* ECLIPSE?!!

Cal: What? What's wrong with her?

Twilight: Cal, don't you know who Eclipse is?

Cal: Well, all I know is, she was a nice person.

Applejack: Eclipse is not a nice pony, Cal.

Rarity: She's evil!

Cal: Doesn't look evil to me.

Rainbow: Trust us, she is way evil!

Cal: Yeah right. :| (Blank Stare) (looks at the time on his watch) Oh look at the time. I'm meeting Eclipse. She has something she wants to give me. Bye!

Twilight: Cal wait!

But it was to late. Cal left the castle.

Starlight: Why won't he believe us? :( (Sad)

Then Dorothy came in.

Dorothy: Hey guys you seen Cal?

Twilight: He's on his way to Eclipse's house, but there's something worse.

Dorothy: What?

Rainbow: We've had to face off against Eclipse Flare before. She has done all sorts of evil here in Equestria.

Dorothy: What? She's evil?

Applejack: I'm afraid so.

Fluttershy: We tried to tell Cal, but he didn't listen.

Applejack: And he said that Eclipse has something for him at her house. We better go and find out what it is.

Twilight: Whatever it is, it can't be good.

Meanwhile at Eclipse's house

Eclipse: Ha Ha! Once Cal drinks this love poison he'll fall in love with the person he sees and that would be me! EVIL Laughter!

Then Cal comes in

Cal: Hi Eclipse got something for me? :) (Smile)

Eclipse: Oh yes. I have this little drink for you.

Cal: Oh good. I am thirsty. :)

Eclipse: Well, here you go. (Lifts the cup with her magic and moves it towards Cal)

Cal: Oh boy. I can't wait.

Just then, Dorothy and the other ponies burst into Eclipse's house.

All: STOP!

Cal: WHAT HAS GONE INTO YOU GUYS TODAY?!! :X (Mad)

Tanner: Cal, please don't drink that! Worried

Cal: Oh...And why not?! :X (Mad)

Dorothy: It could be poisonous.

Twilight: Don't trust Eclipse, Cal.

Pinkie: She's a bad pon-

Rarity: SHE'S AN EVIL PONY!

Cal: Really?! :|

Rainbow: She's tried to take over Equestria!

Applejack: You have to believe us!

Cal: Oh come on! I first meant her and she hasn't took over Equestria to me! :| (Blank Stare)

Twilight: Cal, you don't know anything about her, we do!

Cal: So you do? :|

Dorothy: Please, Cal. Don't drink that. I love you.

Cal: I love you, too.

Dorothy: :thanks:

Eclipse: Ah Cal, are you doing to have your drink?

Dorothy: No he won't Eclipse! We know what you're up to!

Eclipse: Me? I aren't doing nothing Sweating a little...

Cal: Alright guys that's enough! :| (Blank Stare)

Twilight: Eclipse! We know what you're up to!

Just then Cal drinks the poison then he went crazy

Dorothy: NOOOOOO!!! Worried

Eclipse: YESSSSS!!! It's working!!! EVIL Laughter!

Twilight: What have you done to Cal?!

Eclipse: I gave him a love poison. Now he'll fall in love with the first pony he sees and that will be me! EVIL Laughter!

Dorothy: (Gets Angry and pounced onto Eclipse and starts fighting with her)

Cal: (Looks at Dorothy and Eclipse fighting) Hey! Hands off my Eclipse! (Breaks up the fight by throwing Dorothy at the wall)

Dorothy: Ouch! :( (Sad)

Twilight: DOROTHY!!! Worried

Cal: Oh my sweet Eclipse. Are you OK?

Dorothy: Oh no!

Pinkie: This is terrible!

Rarity: What can we do?

Applejack: Well, I remember that Apple Bloom and her friends made Big Macintosh and Cheerilee fall in love with each other with magic. Maybe we can save Cal in the same way.

Eclipse: Yeah. Good luck with that! (uses her magic to push the mane six, Starlight, Dorothy and Tanner outside and out of her way) Now if you losers will excuse us we got shopping to do. EVIL SHOPPING (evillaugh) right, Cal?

Cal: Yes my love!

Then Cal and Eclipse lift to do evil shopping

Dorothy: Tears (then she cries and runs home)

Twilight: Wait! Dorothy come back! Worried

The Mane Six, Starlight, and Tanner gathered back at Twilight's castle.

Twilight: Alright. So as far as I know, in order to break the spell Eclipse has placed on Cal, we need to get Cal to not see her for one hour.

Applejack: But how are we going to do that?

Pinkie: Yeah?

Rarity: Well, Sweetie Belle told me that she and the girls pretended to prepare them for a wedding.

Tanner: I don't think that would be a good idea. Maybe we could get Cal back to Petropolis long enough to break the spell.

Pinkie: But what will we do about Eclipse?

Applejack: Yeah?

Twilight: Eclipse can be quite hard to beat. We'll just have to beat her at her own game.

Starlight: And how are we going to do that?

Rainbow: I think I know how to do it.

Later on, Cal and Eclipse were out for a walk.

Cal: This sure is a great day for a walk. Aww Isn't it, Eclipse?

Eclipse: Indeed. (Grins evilly)

Rainbow: Cal! Cal! (zips in quickly)

Cal: What do you want?!

Eclipse: Yeah Rainbow Crash!

Rainbow: It's Rainbow Dash! :X (Mad)

Eclipse: Whatever! :| (Blank Stare)

Rainbow: Cal, there's a major villain attack back in Petropolis. You need to go there and help your friends at TUFF stop it!

Cal: Seriously? :| (Blank Stare)

Rainbow: Yes. You must come quickly!

Eclipse: Cal's not going anywhere with you! :X (Mad)

Rainbow: Eclipse, Cal is needed right now. Come on, Cal.

Cal: Fine! :| (Blank Stare)

So Cal went with Rainbow Dash, leaving Eclipse behind.

(Cuts to Twilight and the others at her castle watching Cal and Rainbow Dash going into the portal to Petropolis.)

Twilight: Alright. Rainbow Dash just needs to keep Cal away from Eclipse for one hour. In the meantime, we need to do something about Eclipse.

Applejack: Like what?

Starlight: I think we should just capture Eclipse and make sure she doesn't do anymore damage.

Applejack: And how are we going to do that?

Twilight: We'll just need to chase her to Canterlot and make sure she's thrown into a dungeon. Good thing Celestia knows she's evil, too.

Starlight: Good plan. ;) (Wink)

Later on, Eclipse was walking through Ponyville when she heard the ponies talking.

Twilight: So, do you think Cal is doing alright at Canterlot?

Starlight: I hope so. It would be ashamed if he never came back to Ponyville.

Applejack: (Spying on Eclipse) (Whispers) I think she can hear us, keep going.

Eclipse: (saw the ponies) HEY!!! :X (Mad)

Twilight: What?

Eclipse: What's this about Canterlot?

Twilight: Oh. Well, we heard that Cal got done with his mission in Petropolis and he is waiting for you in Canterlot. Hahaha.

Starlight: We didn't think you'd actually hear us, so I guess you got us.

Starlight however was lying, as this was part of the plan.

Eclipse: OK..? Confused

So Eclipse Flare headed onto the train to Canterlot. Twilight, Applejack and Starlight watched.

Twilight: This is perfect. By the time Eclipse gets there, the spell on Cal will be broken. I told Rainbow Dash to take Cal on the train that goes from Petropolis to Canterlot and they'll take care of Eclipse once she gets there.

Applejack: Brilliant plan, Twilight.

Starlight: Train? But did Cal came from Petropolis to Equestria though that portal?

Twilight: Yes. But there's also this train that can go between dimensions. Princess Shine Ortiz used it to get from Equestria to Petropolis.

Starlight: Wow. :O (Eek)

Eclipse was on her way to Canterlot, expecting Cal to be there waiting for her. Having no idea that she had been tricked.

Eclipse: Where is Cal? :| (Blank Stare) (She looks around, but couldn't find him) Where is he?! :| (A train then pulls in) Eclipse: Cal, is that you?

The train pulled in, and out stepped Cal, Dorothy, Kitty, Dudley, and Rainbow Dash. Eclipses ran over.

Eclipse: Cal, there you are, darling. Why did you want me to come here?

Cal: To throw you in the dungeon! :X (Mad)

Eclipse: What?

Dorothy: That's right. Rainbow Dash took Cal back to TUFF, but that was just to keep him away from you to make the effects of your love potion wear off.

Dudley: Cal just needed to be away from you for one hour, and that hour has already past!

Kitty: Now you're under arrest!

Eclipse: I don't think so! You haven't seen the last of me! (uses her horn and disappears)

Cal: Drat! She got away! :X (Mad)

Dorothy: I bet I know where she went! :X (Mad)

Cal: Where?

Dorothy: Her house.

Cal: I hope so.

So they went to Eclipse's house to go and capture her.

Eclipse: (sees the ponies) Oh no you found me! :X (Mad)

Dorothy: That's right, Eclipse. And now you're going to pay for what you did to my Cal!

Eclipse: HA! Well good luck! (tries to use her horn to escape again)

Cal: Quick before she gets away again!

Dorothy jumped onto Eclipse before she had a chance to escape.

Eclipse: GET OFF OF ME YOU IDIOT!!! :X (Mad)

Dorothy: No way. You tried to make Cal fall in love with you. But I'm his girl!

Eclipse: GET OFF!!! Rage

Dorothy: No way!

Cal: Yeah! You're under arrest! :X

Eclipse: I'll get you back, Cal and Dorothy! :X (Mad)

Cal: Yeah. Good luck with that Roll Eyes

After Eclipse was taken to the dungeons at Canterlot, Cal and Dorothy went for a walk.

Cal: I sorry I didn't believe you guys.

Dorothy: It's alright, Cal. :hug:

Cal: :aww:

Dorothy: I'm just glad you're back to normal.

Cal: Thanks. :aww:

Well, Eclipse Flare was put in her place and Cal and Dorothy are back together again.
This fanfiction was role-played by Callewis2 and me. When Cal and Dorothy meet up with Eclipse Flare, Dorothy is worried that Eclipse will take Cal away from here.

Twilight Sparkle, Starlight Glimmer, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, and Fluttershy are (C) to Hasbro.
Cal Lewis is (C) to Callewis2.
Dorothy is (C) to alegonetomorrow.
Eclipse Flare is (C) to Fictioncreatorartist.
Eli J. Brown/Brony is (C) to me.
Tanner is (C) to Yoshikingmaster.
Dudley Puppy and Kitty Katswell are (C) to Butch Hartman.
Shine Ortiz (Only mentioned by Twilight) is (C) to ShineWubbOrtiz2199.
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