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It was a fine summer day. Sonic the hedgehog was doing his usual runs.

Sonic: Look at this day. Its so great. Look at the birds in the trees

Sonic then noticed he was going pretty fast.

Sonic: AAAAAHHHH. I can't stop. Somebody help.

Sonic was going so fast he was too hard for anyone to see. Sonic ran for a long time

Sonic: I got to stop. I got to stop.

Sonic then noticed he was going slower and slower. Finally he stopped

Sonic: Woo. That really tired me out.

Sonic then saw Amy who was in a police suit but the way she was dressed made her look beautiful. Sonic gazed at her. She was dressed with a red belly shirt, long socks, red shorts, and she had a blue police coat and hat.

Sonic: Gee. I think I better go home now

Amy then saw Sonic and cuffed him.

Sonic: Amy what are you doing?

Amy: Sonic, you're under arrest for broken the limit of speed

Sonic's thoughts: Wait. It must be because I was going to fast today.

Sonic was so tired he couldn't say or do anything but to let Amy put him in her police car.

To be continued  
This is based on one of Nancher's deviants and he said i could create this story.

Link to his [link]

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if you have any ideas for this story please tell me. And I changed my mind. After part 16 of The Legend of Zelda Dark Creature is finished I'll work on part 2 of this story

Link to part 2 [link]

This music would suit Sonic's run [link]

Update: I'm now improving on this fanfic.
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:iconweegeevirus9001:
WEEGEEVIRUS9001 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
It would be funny if I appeared in the story and placed a banana peel where sonic would run.
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battleonatrix Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
I know there was some artwork to go with this fanfiction but I can't find it
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:iconpsychic2you:
Psychic2you Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
Great start^^
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:iconamyredshaw:
AmyRedshaw Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
cool!
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:iconblackwind06:
Blackwind06 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
sweet story
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:iconkuro-kai08:
kuro-kai08 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2010
cute
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:iconwinterthehedgehog:
winterthehedgehog Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
omg it is soooo good i love sonic plz make more
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2009
There are 11 parts to this story. But there are more stories I wrote
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:iconaquamarini:
AquaMarini Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
Awesome story so far. :3
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:iconshadowthehedgehog857:
hmph...nice...
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:iconprincessamypink:
PrincessAmyPink Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2008
I like it so far! great work ^^
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amyrose1112008 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008
great story so far
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:iconorumon:
Orumon Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008
The thing only works as an idle joke. Technically Sonic should be okay since he wasn't driving a car.
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
He was going way too fast. Car or hedgehog he broke the rule
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:iconorumon:
Orumon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
Not really. The law only applies to vehicles, and since the law doesn't say anything about running that fast it isn't strictly forbidden, therefore he's legally safe.

The kind of thinking you stated is the response of those to limited to keep up, and they don't deserve have a point of view.
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CanofNothing Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice point.
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
I don't know what to tell you. He would usual run maybe 100 speed. But in the story he ran 1000000000000000000000000000000 which was way to dangerous
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:iconorumon:
Orumon Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
Still, she has no legal way to detain him. Moreover, at that speed he'd pass by her without noticing and be on the other side of the planet by the time he stopped.
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2009
He stopped before she saw him. And for some reason she found out he went to fast
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dodite Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student General Artist
cool :D
i really like it :D
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
thanks.
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:icondodite:
dodite Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Student General Artist
np ^^
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:iconandaverde:
andaverde Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
LOL nice thanks for the note ^_^

but i wish it could be longer but i still hope to see more ^_^
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
You'll see more. This isn't the end. I plan to make a part 2
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:iconandaverde:
andaverde Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
LOL awesome! >=3
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:iconamy-rosse:
Amy-Rosse Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
nice owo :+fav: :)
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Thanks. Did you see Nancher's?
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:iconamy-rosse:
Amy-Rosse Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
em not
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
then you should see it.
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:iconamy-rosse:
Amy-Rosse Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2008
ok
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EmperorNortonII Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
So far, so good. It's funny. :)
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Thanks. Did you see I got the idea from Nancher. His pictures rock and I might do more stories based on them
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alexzazipitslid0814 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
why dident you place the pic?but still love it
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:iconeli-j-brony:
Eli-J-Brony Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2009
Didn't you see :iconnancher:'s picture. This story is based on it
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